Annie, I like this piece. It is an interesting self portrait. There are a few things I want to talk to you about it though, but it would take forever to put it all down on here in a way you would understand. That doesn't mean there are big problems with it, but I want to make sure you take it in the right direction. Bring it with you to school and we will talk. It's a great piece and the suggestions I have are based on just pulling it along a little farther.
Annie, I like this piece. It is an interesting self portrait. There are a few things I want to talk to you about it though, but it would take forever to put it all down on here in a way you would understand. That doesn't mean there are big problems with it, but I want to make sure you take it in the right direction. Bring it with you to school and we will talk. It's a great piece and the suggestions I have are based on just pulling it along a little farther.
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